JACK AND LINA
Once upon a time there was a little boy named Jack and his sister Lina. They were walking along a path named Silly Monkeys. They heard noises like birds singing, alligators snapping, crickets chirping, and wind blowing. There are all types of animals that live on the path also. Suddenly, Jack heard Lina singing a song. “What are you singing?” asked Jack. “I am singing rock to the beat,” Lina said. “Rock the beat, what kind of song is that?” replied Jack. Well it is an old-school song. Ohhhh! An old-school song. “Do you want to sing along?” asked Lina. “No thank you!” Jack and Lina saw a lot of things along the path. They saw flowers, lots of trees, and some amazing insects. Then they both got tired and went home to live happily ever after.
The End!
Thursday, January 8, 2009
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Keona,
ReplyDeleteYou are a great little writer. Keep writing!
I really like this story. I can piture all of these wonderful images in my head. How did you come up with this story?
ReplyDeleteYour writing has such great descriptions throughout the story. It makes you feel like you are there.
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